The Poison Tree Close Reading Essay
In the poem “The Poison Tree”, William Blake uses metaphors, symbolism and allusions to show how anger can create something physical and that anger can be easily remedied by communication. The suppression of anger can lead to the cultivation of anger.
The Poison Tree is a poem about how
not forgiving a foe can lead to secretive resentment leading to the death of
the foe. The first quatrain uses repetition to distinguish the anger against a
friend and the anger against a foe. The speaker was able to forgive his friend
by communicating to him that he was angry, but since he didn’t tell his foe
that he was angry, the anger manifested into something physically harmful to
the foe and mentally harmful to the speaker. Blake personified his wrath into a
tree which grew from his anger and “[he] water’d it in fears, Night &
morning with my tears,” (lines 5-6). The speaker’s joy when he sees the dead
body of his foe on the ground because anger can you to do something you didn’t
think was possible (the physical creation of a tree) and then later regret,
“When the night had veil’d the pole/In the morning glad I see/My foe
outstrech’d beneath the tree,” (line 14-16).
The poison tree isn’t simply a
metaphor for anger but is actually a physical poisoned tree created by the
speaker’s personified anger. The tree comes from a seed of anger – the refusal
to tell foe about anger - and it represents the lack of restraint and self-control.
There is a general allusion to the story of The Garden of Eden from the Bible.
The tree represents the tree of knowledge and grows fruit that tempts the foe
because he knows he can’t have it. The foe steals into the speaker’s garden at
night stealing the apple like Eve did. The unnatural sprawling of the foe that
died is reminiscent of that of Christ on the cross when He was crucified. The
actions of the foe take place before the events of the poem leaving the reader
to guess how serious the offenses of the foe were. Blake causes the reader to infer
that foe was a bully, and that it is now the speaker’s turn to bully the bully
which is a reflection. Imagery is used a lot when talking about the tree and
the poisoned apple, “And it grew both day and night,/Till it bore an apple
bright;/And my foe beheld it shine,/And knew that it was mine,” (lines 12-16).
The poet refers to both the apple and the tree using the word ‘it’ showing that
the speaker doesn’t really care about his anger, just on getting his revenge. The Tempest’s Prospero manifests his
anger into sinking the ship that carries the people who tried to usurp him,
which is an action that takes place before the story begins. Though unlike the
poem, Shakespeare uses a flashback in order to show what transpired to cause
Prospero all this anger towards someone, while Blake never explains what caused
the speaker to become so angry with his foe. Prospero’s anger grows for many
years until the opportunity where they are all on a boat on the way back from a
joyous occasion and e uses a spirit’s powers to try and kill them.
I really like the interesting metaphor of the tree and it's multiple meanings. The author really thought out how to truly use this metaphor to fully explain the damage anger can do to one's psyche
ReplyDeleteTrue, "The Poison Tree" is metaphor but I think it can be characterized more specifically as an allegory for the emotions that build up in a person and take over their thoughts and actions to the point where all they can think of is their anger. The emotion overtakes the person and it's like poison, killing them. Overall calling it a metaphor works fine, especially if it has a literal meaning, like you said.
ReplyDeleteWhen you talk about how the author’s word choice helps illuminate his emotions, I think this is a good to point out. However, I think you need a few more examples to justify why you say this. The connection between The Tempest and “The Poison Tree” is good, because they both use symbols to show their feelings, these symbols you reference as similes which is also true about them. The flashback that you explained Shakespeare uses, is a good contrast to the possible foreshadowing going on within William Blake’s piece. I think it can be characterized as foreshadowing because “The Poison Tree” is the title and one can only assume that is the tree is poisoned, it will eventually die, which is what you explained sort of occurred along with Prospero in The Tempest. In contrast however, Shakespeare doesn’t use this device to hint that Prospero might be killed, which is a good way to compare and contrast the piece.
DeleteI really like the interesting metaphor of the tree and its multiple meanings. The author really thought out how to truly use this metaphor to fully explain the damage anger can do to one's psyche. This can also be seen, like you said, through the comparison to Jesus Christ. This comparison is crucial as both characters are killed out of anger and spite. This really helps to strengthen the “Poison tree” overall as the author’s allusion of the foe “into my garden stole” brings to mind the garden of Gethsemane. This line is crucial in the description of the foe, as the foe now takes on an ambiguous role similar to that of Judas.
ReplyDeleteThis comparison of the foe to Judas really helps to humanize the foe as he now embodies a redeeming quality. This helps to bring life to a character who is completely flat. As Judas was not a completely evil person just as the foe within a “Poison Tree” is not wholly evil. With this realization, the narrator shows remorse for the wasted time spent in pursuit of revenge for a perceived wrong.